Writing assignment 1. Is shyness a weakness or just a type of personality?

[nawal]

Hi everybody,
I think that we talk about the shyness which affects the self confidence and the people social or business life. Then shyness is a weakness because it is delay the people to becomes better and limit the different life progress. But in my opinion, there is another type of shyness which I like it. This shyness I like it more when it happens with a girl. That's happen when somebody like your personality, your face or body. When somebody say anything good to you and you became shy and with girls specially when her checks became red, l like this and I feel that this is not a weakness but it is very nice and cute.
 

[Loïc]

Hi everyone!

   Good subject indeed! This my point of view.

   First of all I totally agree to say that it's a weakness. As told previously, no one whould say "I'd like to be shy". I think it's easier to say it is a trait, and most of all, it seems so difficult to change oneself sometimes, that we think it is inevitable. But still, I consider that as a weakness.

   Secondly, the fact to look shy, is not the same thing than being shy. I agree with the fact that persons who have a reserved behaviour, may simply be the persons the most thoughtful, mature.

   Finally, I also understand that a girl (or a boy) being shy may be cute, and shyness may not be seen as a weakness in this moment. But I would explain that by the fact that someone showing you a weakness may get you more confident, and,  definitively let you see that she (he) is just like you: with weaknesses!

[Wrophy]

perhaps it is because I am a website developer that I can mark-up my content without it inhibiting the final result. Due to the fact that Im so used to writing code, I dont even think about it anymore, I just know what tag to use without changing my thought track, lol